L is for Lucky

I'm doing flash fiction for this year's A to Z challenge, hope you enjoy!


Lucky



Lucky. That’s what everyone says. That I was lucky. Is it luck? Sure, I survived. I was barely even injured, just a few grazes here and there. I still wouldn’t call it lucky. Is it lucky, that I wake up every night covered in sweat, remembering the details of that dreaded day? Is it lucky that every waking thought is haunted by those who didn’t survive? I see their faces everywhere; at work, at home, at the shopping centre. Wherever I go they’re there, following me, wondering why I survived when they didn’t, just waiting for the day they can claim me as one of them.

I wouldn’t call this lucky. I would call it hell.

Comments

  1. Tasha Duncan-Drake14 April 2015 at 11:46

    Survivor's guilt - I imagine there is nothing lucky about that. Beautifully written piece.
    Tasha
    Tasha's Thinkings | Wittegen Press | FB3X (AC)

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  2. Keith's Ramblings14 April 2015 at 12:54

    I guess calling someone lucky in those circumstances is an automatic response. If only we could see inside their heads.

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  3. Nick Wilford14 April 2015 at 13:24

    That's got to be a terrible thing to live with. Hard to imagine it. You really captured a sense of desperation here.

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  4. Jackie14 April 2015 at 15:22

    Chilling. Another great FF piece, Laura!!!

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  5. Susan Gourley/Kelley14 April 2015 at 16:24

    Survivors' guilt. And the difficulty of living with. Very emotionally raw.

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  6. Rob Z Tobor14 April 2015 at 16:48

    Well Done Miss Laura. .. . . . . For various reasons I can relate to your story, these things can be a double edged sword.

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  7. Tyrean Martinson14 April 2015 at 17:35

    Wow! That's some powerful writing! Nice job! And . . . I gave you a small shout-out today at my blog. http://tyreanswritingspot.blogspot.com/

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  8. Sophie Duncan14 April 2015 at 18:13

    Chilling! This built gradually to the icy conclusion - nicely done :)
    Sophie
    Sophie's Thoughts & Fumbles
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    Wittegen Press

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  9. Alex J. Cavanaugh14 April 2015 at 18:41

    Well done and very powerful.

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  10. jaybird14 April 2015 at 20:21

    I am really enjoying your flash fiction. Nice job!

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  11. Haneen Ibrahim14 April 2015 at 20:43

    liked the twist in this one.

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  12. Dixie@dcrelief14 April 2015 at 22:17

    Had me on the edge of my seat, Laura! Well done.

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  13. Kathryn Thornton15 April 2015 at 04:59

    Well written and so true.

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  14. i b arora15 April 2015 at 05:52

    sometimes being lucky could be difficult to live with

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  15. Click15 April 2015 at 19:25

    I can see that being a hard sort of luck to live with. You'd be torn between being guilty to be alive but also relieved that it wasn't you.

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