Curse

I'm doing flash fiction for this year's A to Z challenge, hope you enjoy!


This one is kind of a follow-on from my A post. 



Curse:


It happened fairly quickly. People started getting ill; they quarantined the entire village, no one could go in or out. Then they started having hallucinations, saying they’d seen a woman in their house, wearing old fashioned clothes and muttering strange things. Then came the animals; cats, toads, owls, clustered around the homes of those who were sick, waiting, watching.

Soon I was the only one who hadn’t been affected by any of this, and I could think of only one reason why: I brought her back. The rest of the village were being punished, even though it was their ancestors who ended her life, so long ago.

I was being spared, as I was the one who had given her life again.

Everyone was cursed, because of me.

Comments

  1. Click3 April 2015 at 10:51

    Ooh, that's creepy. It's got the potential to be expanded into a much longer story. :-)

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  2. Unknown3 April 2015 at 12:17

    Talk about guilt!

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  3. Tasha Duncan-Drake3 April 2015 at 12:49

    Oh dear - moving that slab was no such a good idea after all.
    Tasha
    Tasha's Thinkings | Wittegen Press | FB3X (AC)

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  4. Rosie Amber3 April 2015 at 13:31

    Love your theme, I have given you a shout out from my blog today, enjoy the rest of the challenge https://rosieamber.wordpress.com/

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  5. Alex J. Cavanaugh3 April 2015 at 14:25

    Bummer position to be in.

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  6. Rob Z Tobor3 April 2015 at 14:27

    Clever but is it them that are cursed because they are ill or is it you that is cursed for thinking you have made them ill. . . . . When I say you, I refer to the you of the story teller not you as in Miss Laura.

    Well Done again.

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  7. Sophie Duncan3 April 2015 at 14:51

    Is there going to be a way out of it, to end the curse? Will there be a part 3?
    Sophie
    Sophie's Thoughts & Fumbles
    FB3X
    Wittegen Press

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  8. Haneen Ibrahim3 April 2015 at 15:00

    Goody! goody! I love this one, thank you for continuing with the first story :) can't wait for the next (smiles hopefully)
    "Haneen/I Will Never Give you Up (479)"

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  9. Keith's Ramblings3 April 2015 at 15:39

    Guess you're not the most popular person in the village! Good story brewing here.

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  10. Dixie@dcrelief3 April 2015 at 16:35

    Well, stop that! Great post.

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  11. betty3 April 2015 at 16:38

    Oh, I wonder what will happen when they realized why they were being cursed and who caused it.

    betty

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  12. Annalisa Crawford3 April 2015 at 16:56

    Oh dear, that's a lot of guilt to handle!

    Annalisa, writing A-Z vignettes, at Wake Up, Eat, Write, Sleep

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  13. S. L. Hennessy3 April 2015 at 17:17

    OOOH, that's so dark and creeptastic! I love it.

    Good luck with the 2015 A to Z Challenge!
    A to Z Co-Host S. L. Hennessy
    http://pensuasion.blogspot.com

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  14. David P. King3 April 2015 at 17:38

    Guilt can certainly feel like a curse. Awesome way of depicting it! :)

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  15. Susan Gourley/Kelley3 April 2015 at 20:56

    Sins of the father. I don't believe a person should be punished for something their ancestors did but it makes a great story.

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  16. Varsha4 April 2015 at 13:05

    I would love it if you continued this story :)

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  17. L.G. Keltner4 April 2015 at 20:04

    I'd feel so guilty! Great story!

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  18. Unknown4 April 2015 at 22:15

    I love that story - so creepy and yet touching. Good luck on the A-Z, and have a lovely weekend!

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  19. Bevimus5 April 2015 at 23:06

    Yup, I knew that had to be a bad thing.

    I find the sentinel animals most creepy.

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  20. Sara C. Snider6 April 2015 at 07:51

    Interesting. The plot thickens...

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  21. i b arora6 April 2015 at 15:47

    there is hardly any justice in the world, being punished for the sins of forefathers

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  22. Heather Musk6 April 2015 at 20:55

    A brilliant follow-on from Awoken, this has a lot of potential in it Laura.

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  23. Angela Yuriko Smith7 April 2015 at 02:12

    Nice bit of writing!

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